Forever Young
By ppruel, 15th Aug 2010 | Follow this author
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If I could choose to stay forever young,
So I could enjoy the rest of my life with you guys –
I’ll do it though I know it is impossible…
Missing My Young Age Life
If I could only go back to my young age life
Where I lay in peace with the caring world
That gave me light, strength and hope
As a little child so full of innocence
With my neighbor’s angels:
Playing hide and seek
Swimming in the crystal river with the morning puff of wind
Climbing up the trees, crawling on sandy shores
Skipping over the green meadows
And pretending flying like birds in the breeze…
Now I am In My Mid-Life
It is claiming me restlessness
And itchy feet a symptom
My strength is deteriorating
I’m scared of hearing those seconds
Those passed when the clock sings
I can hear cries when the sun descends
As loud as the roaring thunder and lightning
Their sounds are bouncing back on high mountains
Brought by the strong wind - they caused fear!
Everything Comes And Goes
I am certain now that everything in this world comes and goes
Although I would wish to be always a youngster
And enjoy my youth to the utmost…
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16th Aug 2010 (#)
thats why i say
after 19 i stopped growing and so young i remain
lovely poetry did u read me ?
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16th Aug 2010 (#)
yeah loverme get it. hehehe. so you don't celebrate your birthdate anymore?
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16th Aug 2010 (#)
NEVER DID
NEVER KNEW
WHO WILL
IN ANYCASE WILL
AFTER 19
I WENT STILL..........
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16th Aug 2010 (#)
LOL, anyway it's just OK. since then we are hooked to write poetry let's live and enjoy with our poems! you're great Loverme.
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16th Aug 2010 (#)
thanks you all love me
thats why i call myself
loverme
means
love me please
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16th Aug 2010 (#)
thanks you all love me
thats why i call myself
loverme
means
love me please
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16th Aug 2010 (#)
sure, i'll always...
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16th Aug 2010 (#)
your name here is really unique. love it too!
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16th Aug 2010 (#)
put your clock back
pull ur socks up
get into jeans
and feel u have gotten
new genes
like me
i do feel that young still maybe
not as i was at 19
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16th Aug 2010 (#)
oh! is that really working? hehehe, I'll try loverme.
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17th Aug 2010 (#)
keep trying
is all that i say,
no one read my poetry
last year i say
thirty to fifty now read me daily wow
now that'll u say
keep at it any way
more will read u not for what u have to or need to convey ,
but what a loveliness,
even ur name does display thats it,
the secret of my success,
so i wrote over 3000 poems since yesterday
no jokes
a day is a year for me any way.
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17th Aug 2010 (#)
wow! that's awesome loverme. you would have a collections of poems to treasure either on ebook or in a hard copy.
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17th Aug 2010 (#)
i am a poor person
i have written 3000 poems
this year plus half
i know little about publication except publishers would like u to write for them
and pay them
and e book stuff is beyond me thanks for ur inspiration to me
pleaes read me
www.triond.com
lovelyhoney
over 3000poems perhaps maybe more
also on neopoet
as loved
thanks ur gr88888888888888 u can see a diamond freely
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17th Aug 2010 (#)
Ok loverme, I'll check out the link. Are you also writing in that site? Great!
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17th Aug 2010 (#)
yes
neopoet and triond
and advise me on eprinting stuff etc thanks to thee
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17th Aug 2010 (#)
you're always welcome. keep on writing,
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17th Aug 2010 (#)
thankxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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