His beautiful eyes!

Rathnashikamani By Rathnashikamani, 4th Apr 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
Posted in Wikinut>Writing>Poetry

She knows who was this guy but could not recall when and where she met him before.

It might have been for ages she did not see him. She had a long forgotten memory of him and she gets a sudden surge of that faint memory and she realizes it had been so vivid image of him that she cherished in her heart for ages.

And she never knew how many lives had already passed before she realized the strength of her love for him at the quick instance of his looks penetrating into her heart.

As if it's just now!

I'm trying to write
a poem about this guy
whose
beautiful brown eyes
entice me
endlessly
and my heart beats
faster
when he looks
into my eyes!

Whenever I look at him
I concentrate only
at his big brown eyes;
they are mine
I love those eyes
I don't know why?

Those looks I knew
from ages
and a sudden glance
captures the long forgotten
memories of the times gone afar
and fading into a mystic cloud
but his looks
revive
those forgotten memories
and bring them
alive
as he glances
sharply and straight
into my craving eyes!


And then
when our eyes meet
we just laugh.

His laugh is
just as beautiful
as his eyes.

I remember that laugh
echoing from
the depths of my heart
that beats high
as he laughs
as if to signal
our old and forgotten
attachment.

I feel so nice
and happy and
.....safe
whenever I look
into his eyes.

I'm not mistaken
about his eyes
and his laugh
and
the way I feel about him.

We lived a life
that made us depart
abruptly
and I recall faintly
how I lamented
his separation.

And now is the time
he's here and now

But I don't know how
to tell
all that was
past
but appears as if it's just now.


Photo credit: http://commons.wikimedia.org/


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Men are made
Meditation
Spilled Words
Butterflies that flutter by
Song Eternal
Death is the fact of Life
Best wishes
Who am I?
How do you win my heart?
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author avatar Denise O
4th Apr 2011 (#)

I just love your way with words. Nice work of art. Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
4th Apr 2011 (#)

Denise,
Thank you. I'm inspired by your words.

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author avatar Hamender
4th Apr 2011 (#)

Nice poem....

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
4th Apr 2011 (#)

Thanks Hamender for stopping by and encouraging me.

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author avatar joan marie
4th Apr 2011 (#)

Great free verse and use of language. I love reading your work outloud.

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
4th Apr 2011 (#)

joan marie,

You are really wonderful and I like the way you comment.

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author avatar Jenny Heart
4th Apr 2011 (#)

Exceptional!

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
4th Apr 2011 (#)

Jenny Heart,
Thanks to you.

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author avatar Delicia Powers
4th Apr 2011 (#)

As romantic and warm as the glow of candle light...

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
13th Apr 2011 (#)

You're so poetic in commenting also.

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author avatar Blossom S
4th Apr 2011 (#)

Excellent written. love it. xx

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
13th Apr 2011 (#)

Thanks.

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author avatar JohnH
4th Apr 2011 (#)

lovely!

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
13th Apr 2011 (#)

Thanks JohnH!

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author avatar Songbird B
4th Apr 2011 (#)

Just beautiful, Rathnashikamani, your way with words touches me....

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author avatar Retired
5th Apr 2011 (#)

Very Nice.

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author avatar hestylim
5th Apr 2011 (#)

I love it! ^.^

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
13th Apr 2011 (#)

Rama and hestylim,
Thanks to you both.

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author avatar Gene Dove
28th May 2011 (#)

Really well done, master of art.

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