Spilled Words

Rathnashikamani By Rathnashikamani, 2nd Mar 2011 | Follow this author | RSS Feed
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I don't know how other poets spin their verse but this is what I felt by myself.

Spilled Words





I try to build the worlds
out of spilled words

Some words in revelry
tempt me
to attempt at glee

Some words harp on
some hard ideas and
try them as sharp swords

I try to harvest
words worth
from the wolds of dearth

In other words,
I cry for the moon
in the after-noon
and die for the muse
trying to amuse.

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author avatar Blossom S
3rd Mar 2011 (#)

I wonder who spilled out the information. LOL

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
3rd Mar 2011 (#)

Thank you Blossom,
It's me. LOL!

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author avatar richardpeeej
3rd Mar 2011 (#)

A very unusual and cleverly written poem. I enjoyed reading it.

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
3rd Mar 2011 (#)

richardpeeej,

Thanks. Your comments are worth to me.

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author avatar Songbird B
3rd Mar 2011 (#)

Clever and oh, how I empathise, Rathnashikamani!
Lovely share as always...I really enjoy your poetry...

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
3rd Mar 2011 (#)

Thanks my melody queen! When I am going to hear you?

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author avatar muthusamy
3rd Mar 2011 (#)

You have presented a well thought out poem. Thank you for the share

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
6th Mar 2011 (#)

Thank you Muthusamy,

I'm delighted by your appreciation.

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author avatar Denise O
3rd Mar 2011 (#)

I dont know how others put theirs together but, I do know one thing. I like the way you do yours. Nice work/art. Thank you for sharing.:)

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
6th Mar 2011 (#)

Denise, I can't say more than thanks for the mention.

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author avatar Retired
6th Mar 2011 (#)

Different from any other poem that I have read. Nice work.

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
6th Mar 2011 (#)

Hi GN,
How nice to hear from you such a comment!

Thank you.

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author avatar jasond
8th Mar 2011 (#)

wow, that was great, realy enjoyd that.

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
9th Mar 2011 (#)

Jason,
Your kind words mean a lot to me.

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author avatar jvaughan
10th Mar 2011 (#)

I may not understand this writing, but it is very well written. What I seem to get from it is that you like to bring out the best in others. I'm probably way off but still I enjoyed reading it and wanted to comment.

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author avatar Rathnashikamani
10th Mar 2011 (#)

jvaughan,

Thanks for the compliments.

I wish you all the best.

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