Pages tagged with Sandcastles

Molly, Milly and the family are spending the day on the beach. Dad's signed up to play in the volleyball tournament and Mom and the kids are going to play in the water and build sandcastles. Molly wants to be a spectator at the tournament and Milly plans to remain under her sun umbr...
“This broke and, Dad, I didn’t know how to tell you about it. So I came with it. You’re right, it’s beyond repair. And what Dad, I’m going to miss it.” Noah’s eyes closed and he rocked gently as he spoke. He asked all the questions in his mind. He told his Dad about meet...
So, here's Chapter One. Do let me know whether it sets the mood. :) And feedbacks, positive or negative are welcome. I need to grow up as a story teller. This is the first draft of my work.Hope you enjoy it. Do let me know if it is engaging enough to look out for the next chapter. :)
"Love is just another sandcastle... And the farther it is from the raging sea, the safer it is... But Sandcastles can be made only with wet sand... Sand touched by the salty sea... And so it's near always... And there are always salty tears in Love... as there are always the sprays fr...
“Now, don’t talk like a loser,” Jean chortled. “Get [i]lost[/i] first. And make me jealous! Take it as a challenge!” “You are a damned carnivorous optimist, Jean. Does marrying do that to you?” “To some, if they get lucky.” Jean shoved a hand at Noah. “Now, buck up...
“Now, tell me why still, after ten years, you are the only one gobbling my pancakes,” she said with a voice that said she wouldn’t let him go until he told her the truth. “And Leno and the kids not with you.” Downing a glass of milk, Noah got up to his feet....
Until this very moment, my novel - under- construction was untitled. I had a few names in my mind, and I was confused. But I guess, 'Amidst Sandcastles' is an apt name. I am planning to publish the novel I am working on now, part by part here. I want some serious feedback on it - star...
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